You have to streamline the head much more, that glob of stuff looks horrible. Also, adding some red krystal flash that extends away from the body will wiggle in the water creating a more life like fly. Shorter hooks will help the bucktail move more freely, and the white tied back futher will keep the wing from fouling as much. Proportional eyes to the size of the body and a contrasting lateral line krystal flash are important as well.
The first tying lesson is free
The first tying lesson is free